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- Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:57 pm
- Forum: Questions About Rejections
- Topic: Any Suggestions/Advice?
- Replies: 14
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Re: Any Suggestions/Advice?
Wow. Thanks for all your help and visual imagery! Looked up the link and see your point re unparallel comparison – appreciate the explanation. It's hard looking at something a million times and having no clue as to what is wrong. In regards to the vagueness of “so much more”, following sentences ela...
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:59 pm
- Forum: Questions About Rejections
- Topic: Any Suggestions/Advice?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 12373
Re: Any Suggestions/Advice?
Thanks everyone!!! I really appreciate your time. I'm also very impressed with the responses. They've helped heaps. The statement was in the intro and the rest of the article/later sentences elaborated on this statement. I already have two rejections (out of only 22 articles) so I am thinking it mig...
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:58 pm
- Forum: Questions About Rejections
- Topic: Any Suggestions/Advice?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 12373
Any Suggestions/Advice?
Hi Everyone, I'm relatively new to CC. I was wondering if someone can explain why the below sentence is awkward or unclear???? "Please proofread for awkward/unclear wording. Ex: Often seen as just a leisurely stroll, walking can involve so much more." I thought it was an interesting/succin...