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by damianperez
Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:00 pm
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: Affect vs. Effect
Replies: 9
Views: 6313

Re: Affect vs. Effect

Most likely, the reason that the ed cited it as an error is because of the awkward phrasing of the sentence that lead to confusion in understanding the sentence. I agree with celeste, in that something should not be changed to be incorrect. Sometimes it's better, as celeste did with the examples, to...
by damianperez
Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:55 am
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: help-SEO optimization-how important is it?
Replies: 8
Views: 6060

Re: help-SEO optimization-how important is it?

I have used the keyword tool before but never really applied it to anything. I agree with Oldman and many of my English teachers have told me to keep an eye out for repetition. What I was wondering though, was instead of picking one phrase and constantly repeating it throughout was if I could take a...
by damianperez
Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:43 am
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: Grammar error
Replies: 10
Views: 9019

Re: Grammar error

It's nice to see you active on the forums as well Jade. It was your interviews of Hayley and Celeste that I read. I've also read some of your articles pertaining to CC so it's nice to see the three biggest names I associate with CC, the ones that also convinced me to try CC out, being so actively en...
by damianperez
Fri Feb 04, 2011 1:03 am
Forum: Questions and Answers
Topic: help-SEO optimization-how important is it?
Replies: 8
Views: 6060

help-SEO optimization-how important is it?

Firstly, I was wondering how important seo optimization is in gaining more sales. I have a rudimentary knowledge of the basics - find a keyword/key phrase and use it naturally throughout the article. Does there seem to be a trend that seo optimized articles sell more often or more quickly and is it ...
by damianperez
Thu Feb 03, 2011 11:35 pm
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: Grammar error
Replies: 10
Views: 9019

Re: Grammar error

I'd like to once again express my appreciation for all the help. As an aside, I'd like to note how refreshing it was having read information (interviews of, tips on CC, CC reviews, etc.) from both Celeste and Hayley, and seeing you both so active, engaging, and helpful in the forums.
by damianperez
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:26 pm
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: Grammar error
Replies: 10
Views: 9019

Re: Grammar error

Thank you both for the advice and help. I will most likely change it to "you" and try to rephrase it to sound less awkward. This shouldn't be a problem since most of the article addressing the reader in this way. I guess I tried changing it to "one" and "them self" beca...
by damianperez
Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:12 pm
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: Grammar error
Replies: 10
Views: 9019

Grammar error

Hello everyone, This is the message I received: ==== Editorial Information for Your Article: ==== " If possible, going to bed 15-30 minutes closer to the newly set bedtime each night allows the body to progressively adapt to the change" --- check for missing punctuation *this sentence is m...