Rejection of "How to Prolong a Bouquet's Life"

[ammalia]

Hi.
I am new at Constant Content. My article "How to Prolong a Bouquet's Life" was rejected with the explanation that it contained grammatical errors. After I reread it carefully, I concluded that some of the expressions should be revised and, also, I corrected two words with missing letters. I was sure that it would be accepted next time. However, the next message said that this article had not been adequately revised. I cannot understand the problem. I revised some of the expressions that may seem awkward and I do not see any other mistakes - in words, expressions, punctuation, or even structure. I have not had problems with my writing till now.

I would be grateful if you tell me the exact reasons for rejection, maybe with one or two examples. I think this article contains valuable information in which someone may be interested and I would not like to leave it unsubmitted.

[Ed]

I'm sorry, but finding errors is the responsibility of the author. Once articles are rejected, they are purged from our system.

Your revisions were better, but the article still contained significant problems - phrases that would seem illogical or awkward to a speaker of English.

Ed