Why was "Why Garden" rejected?

[write4life]

Hello,
In the rejection email for "Why Garden" I was told to revise for awkward word choice/phrasing. I am hoping to get more specifics about what revisions I need to make. The phrasing that is probably being referred to is the line that reads something to the effect of, "...find a piece of willing land and have at it..." but I am not sure. Could I get more specific information please?
Thank you
Gloria

[Ed]

Because we don't keep rejected articles on file, I can't go back and look at it. The line you quoted doesn't seem to be the problem - it seems to make sense in the context of your topic. I'm sorry I can't be any more specific. If you revise where you feel you need to and resubmit, I'll be able to provide more information if you've missed something.

Thanks,
Ed