Rejection of "Top 15 Horror Movies 2000s"

[Shane Dayton]

Hi. I was wondering if I could get more specific examples or guidance on the problems with "Top 15 Horror Movies 2000's (So Far)" and "Big & Jolly: The 10 Best Funny Fat Guys." I've had a long and great relationship with Constant Content, and I definitely want that to continue, but recently I just can't seem to get it right.

Is there a specific mistake I keep repeating? Is it formatting or long sentences? I know your busy, and I don't want to waste your time or mine if I keep making the same mistake and don't know that it's even a mistake.

Thanks for the help. Even one or two specific examples from each would really help me see what you're looking for and what I'm failing at.

Best,

Shane

[Ed]

Please have someone you trust look over your articles. You frequently make mistakes with sentence structure, make typos (ex: "Saw" was not capitalized nor punctuated/set off as movies should be), and your explanations/introductions are often unclear. It appears as if you need to take more time proofreading and refrain from submitting initial drafts. In addition, please avoid using the first-person point-of-view. It is also important to wait a day or two before resubmitting articles that have been rejected so that you can look at them with fresh eyes.

My intent is not to give you a backhanded compliment here, but I know you can submit content that is written without errors, so it is somewhat disappointing when you submit, then resubmit with problems still intact.

Thanks,
Ed