I've been trying to make myself present around these parts and learn my way around CC. I revised my submissions multiple times trying to conform to the guidelines but I fell short

Could someone be willing to look at my work and provide some guidance? Someone who has been down this road before? Editor buddy?
*Note : Just reread the guidelines, I was further off than I thought, some big sections I hadn't really wrapped my head around, will need someone to look it over before I resubmit.