Grammar correction for rejected article

[RaisingDreams]

My first article got rejected due to grammatical mistakes, although my Word checker didn't find anything. However, I checked some university sites and learned something from there. Based on these, corrected the mistakes on my first submission. I'm ready to resubmit again, but I would be glad if got someone helpful to take a look at it.

Thanks
RaisingDreams

[Ed]

If you depend upon your grammar checker to find errors, it is important to review rules for grammar and apply them to your work. Authors who are unable to find their own errors usually need more practice before submitting to Constant Content.

Please review the tips for editing your own work. We ask that authors have enough knowledge about grammar and writing rules to find their own errors.
http://www.constant-content.com/forum/v ... =4&t=14407

Thanks,
Ed