insufficient review

[vinayakgole]

Hi,
My article on Online Banking has been rejected citing the reason "This article has not been adequately revised.". Could you please help me understand what this means so I could correct and resubmit?
Thanks in advance.

[Ed]

If it has not been adequately revised, then you need to use the information given in your initial rejection, since all points have not been addressed. Your article contains awkward/unnatural wording/phrasing.

Ed