Questions about "A Warm-Hearted Movie: P.S. I Love You"

[Lisa-Anne Sanderson]

Hello,

I did revise this article and I've just read it quickly again. I can see that I didn't explain who Gerry is and I can easily fix that up.

However, I really can't see too much wrong with it? Could you please explain the exact reasons why it has been rejected again?

Regards,
Lisa

[Ed]

It had typos, include a double period, misspelled "Jr." and - while it might be argued that these sentence could go either way - a couple of sentences that should have commas. Please make sure your articles are free of such errors, especially after an initial rejection.

Thanks,
Ed

[Ed]

As an added tip, some authors have success printing out articles that have been rejected because the hard copy tends to be easier to read than the on-screen version.

[Lisa-Anne Sanderson]

Thank you very much, Ed. I will definitely try to go through my articles with a fine-tooth comb in future. It is a very good tip to print them out so I will do that as well.

I am sorry to reply so late.

Best Regards,
Lisa