Could someone possibly read over my article?

[LLuDawg]

I resubmitted my first article yet again. At first it was rejected for the first person POV which I fixed. Today it was rejected for a couple of small things like You're vs Your. I fixed them all and re-read over everything twice. It seemed alright but I'm scared that I may get suspended if it's rejected again. It won't be any use if you guys find a mistake because it's already been submitted but does anyone want to read it over for me? Thanks!

[jadedragon]

Sounds like you are on the right track. Read the guidelines very carefully again and than write your next article.

[LLuDawg]

My article has been accepted! My first one which is sweet and yeah, I'm on my way to write more!