Punctuation help, please
Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:38 am
I'm not sure how to correctly punctuate this. Here is an excerpt, perhaps someone could give me a little help here.
Trick shot #1 - The shot being lined up is a scratch shot. If taken, the cue ball will ricochet into a pocket. The player takes the shot anyway and, rather than ricocheting, the cue ball stops dead on impact with the other ball.
How it is done - Hit the top of the cue ball rather than the center, and do so in a downward motion. Ordinarily, a ball rolls top to bottom; the top of the ball rolls down and frontward, or counterclockwise as seen from the side. You want to make it roll in the opposite way - the top rolling down from the hind side, or clockwise - while still moving forward. When this happens the backwards roll of the ball causes it to stop rolling as soon as it encounters another object, thereby stopping the ball.
Now, the separation between "Trick shot #1" and the description... Should that be a hyphen, or a colon? And should it be followed by one space or two spaces before the description starts?
Thanks for the assistance.
Trick shot #1 - The shot being lined up is a scratch shot. If taken, the cue ball will ricochet into a pocket. The player takes the shot anyway and, rather than ricocheting, the cue ball stops dead on impact with the other ball.
How it is done - Hit the top of the cue ball rather than the center, and do so in a downward motion. Ordinarily, a ball rolls top to bottom; the top of the ball rolls down and frontward, or counterclockwise as seen from the side. You want to make it roll in the opposite way - the top rolling down from the hind side, or clockwise - while still moving forward. When this happens the backwards roll of the ball causes it to stop rolling as soon as it encounters another object, thereby stopping the ball.
Now, the separation between "Trick shot #1" and the description... Should that be a hyphen, or a colon? And should it be followed by one space or two spaces before the description starts?
Thanks for the assistance.