Can't see what's wrong
Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:48 am
I'm having trouble understanding the grammatical errors they are pointing out. Can you help me?
Below is their sample. Farther down I will post the full paragraph.
We have reviewed your content, "Smart Tools for Planning Your Small Business." Unfortunately, this article requires revision before we can accept it.
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We do not accept content with grammar errors.
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Full para Starting a new business is about taking pieces of a dream that have been rumbling around in your mind for some time, and putting them together in an official way with the intention of making a profit. One of the most significant steps of starting your business is accumulating those pieces and putting them into a concise and professional format that can been seen on paper or on a computer screen.
Below is their sample. Farther down I will post the full paragraph.
We have reviewed your content, "Smart Tools for Planning Your Small Business." Unfortunately, this article requires revision before we can accept it.
==== Editorial Information for Your Article: ====
We do not accept content with grammar errors.
Example: putting them into a concise and professional format that can been seen on paper ... //
Full para Starting a new business is about taking pieces of a dream that have been rumbling around in your mind for some time, and putting them together in an official way with the intention of making a profit. One of the most significant steps of starting your business is accumulating those pieces and putting them into a concise and professional format that can been seen on paper or on a computer screen.