Technique for Choosing the Right Word
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 7:29 am
This web page has some great tips (even if you aren't writing an academic paper), but I found the following for choosing the right word to be especially useful.
From: http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts ... hoice.html
"Try the slash/option technique, which is like brainstorming as you write. When you get stuck, write out two or more choices for a questionable word or a confusing sentence, e.g., "questionable/inaccurate/vague/inappropriate." Pick the word that best indicates your meaning or combine different terms to say what you mean."
Examples (not from the page):
Bland/flavorless soup can be made more exciting with hot sauce. (Flavorless is more descriptive.)
Tips to/for Getting Out of Debt (For) or Tips for Helping You/to Help You Get out of Debt (Second option is less wordy.)
This prescription drug purports/is purported to ease migraine headaches. (The second option is the correct one.)
While your brain may do this automatically when you write, if you actually record your options, you can determine what word or phrase is better upon reviewing what you wrote rather than making a split-second decision that may result in an incorrect or awkward phrase.
Ed
From: http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts ... hoice.html
"Try the slash/option technique, which is like brainstorming as you write. When you get stuck, write out two or more choices for a questionable word or a confusing sentence, e.g., "questionable/inaccurate/vague/inappropriate." Pick the word that best indicates your meaning or combine different terms to say what you mean."
Examples (not from the page):
Bland/flavorless soup can be made more exciting with hot sauce. (Flavorless is more descriptive.)
Tips to/for Getting Out of Debt (For) or Tips for Helping You/to Help You Get out of Debt (Second option is less wordy.)
This prescription drug purports/is purported to ease migraine headaches. (The second option is the correct one.)
While your brain may do this automatically when you write, if you actually record your options, you can determine what word or phrase is better upon reviewing what you wrote rather than making a split-second decision that may result in an incorrect or awkward phrase.
Ed