Say NO to Vagueness
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 6:59 am
Hi Writers,
Please avoid using vague words like "things," "something," "someone" (as well as descriptors that aren't at all descriptive: good, bad, etc.).
When you travel, you don't "do things" - you see sights, go on tours, visit museums, participate in outdoor activities, and dine, relax, sleep in.
If you're shopping, you don't shop for, "things like . . . " You shop for items specifically. Shoes. Clothing. A new ladder.
Someone isn't only someone - she may be a coworker, friend, acquaintance, individual, relative, homebuyer.
Using words like "good" or "bad" to describe stress, disease treatments, trip planning, how a wedding dress will look, the importance of getting a home inspection doesn't add anything to the writing. These are poor placemarkers for words that will work better.
Thanks,
Ed
Please avoid using vague words like "things," "something," "someone" (as well as descriptors that aren't at all descriptive: good, bad, etc.).
When you travel, you don't "do things" - you see sights, go on tours, visit museums, participate in outdoor activities, and dine, relax, sleep in.
If you're shopping, you don't shop for, "things like . . . " You shop for items specifically. Shoes. Clothing. A new ladder.
Someone isn't only someone - she may be a coworker, friend, acquaintance, individual, relative, homebuyer.
Using words like "good" or "bad" to describe stress, disease treatments, trip planning, how a wedding dress will look, the importance of getting a home inspection doesn't add anything to the writing. These are poor placemarkers for words that will work better.
Thanks,
Ed