Please identify grammer mistakes into it for me

[Daydreamer]

Not to mention, it has been rejected and I am clueless about mistakes.

Thanks,
Arvind

[Lysis]

hey daydreamer,

You may want to delete this. The forum is indexed by Google.

Just to help a bit, you have a few misuses of prepositions. Using "their" for chhaggraas is wrong. There are also a few missing commas and missing "the" terms. There are actually quite a few mistakes. You might want to read it later when you're not so frustrated.

[Ed]

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Thank you,
Ed