help with a rejected article

[kikib]

Hi everyone, I really need help with a rejected article. The format is correct and I've read the guidelines several times. Could someone please take a look at the article for me and let me know what the problems are. Ths is my first time using this site and I just need one article to be accepted to get he idea of how everything works.

[JessicadenHaan]

I don't know what the specific rules are regarding other writers reviewing your work, but I know you shouldn't post articles in the forums. Can you tell us the reason it got rejected, and maybe I (or anyone else) can let you know what some common errors could be? Then you can check for those in your writing.

[Antonia]

As well as posting the rejection reason here so you can get some advice, if you like you can email it to me and I will give it a quick proofread. My username is cashew2501. Search for me on the main site and then click on Contact Author and paste the article into the body of the email.