My Turn Again...

[Zabrina]

I've learned in my time here that Ed is nearly always right. The tricky part can be figuring out what he means.

I had an article on the do's and don'ts of online learning rejected for clarity reasons, and I'm not sure where to begin revising it. Is there anything specific that was confusing that I should hammer into shape, or could someone take a look and help me out?

Thanks so much.

[Ed]

There were several instances where the clarity of this piece needed improvement. Please give this article thorough consideration.

Thanks,
Ed

[Zabrina]

Okay, I'll read it through and see what I can figure out. Thanks.