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First Impressions Sell Homes

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"First Impressions Sell Homes – 5 Mistakes to Avoid."
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Please proofread thoroughly for grammar errors before resubmission.

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your do-it-yourself project could cost you far more on the sales price then you ever saved on doing the work yourself.
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Does this article just stink Ed? If "do-it-yourself" is wrong then 88 million plus results on Google Suggest are wrong too. Maybe it should be "sale price" rather then "sales price". I can't do anything right today it seems. Stupid little errors in this article are driving us both nuts.
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Then/than?
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Oh my word - the error I'm trying hardest to break. Thanks. I totally redid the sentence this time. I'll go check it again.
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Thanks!
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checked and rechecked. Found the then/than error a second place too. All fixed, submitted and ready for you to reject again :evil:
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