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[WTPayne]

I didn't understand what this meant, could someone please expand? Thanks!

"Please revise for author interference. Personal information is most often irrelevant in movie reviews. Thanks."

[Ed]

Hi. Sorry - I usually include the explanatory blog post.
http://www.constant-content.com/blog/?p=90

I just mean that reviews are usually written with the reader in mind, and including personal reactions interrupts the flow and doesn't add anything to the review. For example, explaining how a movie is suspenseful within the context of the movie itself is more effective than saying, "The movie made me jump out of my seat."

Thanks,
Ed

[WTPayne]

Thanks!