Can some one plz help me out?

[vimlaksh]

Hi,

My first submission was rejected recently for improper grammar usage and awkward wording. Since then I have browsed some online Grammar sites and also visited the links given by Ed in another post. Now that I have substantially changed, and hopefully corrected, my article, i would be grateful if some CC veteran can go through my article and point out the remaining errors and/or some good online grammar resources.

You see, I don't want to waste my remaining two submissions and get booted from CC.

Plz Help.

[HayleyWriter]

Hi,

Send me an email through the CC system with your article and I'll review it. I don't promise perfection, but sometimes another pair of eyes helps pick up the errors.

Kind regards,

Hayley

[vimlaksh]

Hey Hayley,

Thanks a lot, sending you the altered writeup right away.