Lost article - rejected?

[PeggyTee]

Hi Ed

In a fit of housekeeping, I deleted all my emails in my inbox, without looking at them (Sorry, my bad). Please could you tell me if my article: Breaking All the Rules: Never Too Old for Miniskirts was rejected and why?

Thank you.

Peggy

[Ed]

Edited for correction

Peggy,

The reason for rejection was because a negative statement segued into a set of examples that were supposed to be positive, which made the examples sound as if they were examples of the previous statement.

"Sentences in first paragraph. A couple more sentences. Some women wear ratty clothes and think nothing of it. For example, Michelle Obama . . . "

Ed

[PeggyTee]

Thanks Ed. Will review and rewrite.

Cheers
Peggy