History of Fundamentalist Mormon Movements

CoreyR · Post by **CoreyR** » Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:39 am

You have rejected my article entitled "History of Fundamentalist Mormon Movements" and I am wondering if you are finding fault with some of the grammar and punctuation in the quote I am using out of the Book of Mormon. Unfortunately, Joseph Smith was a notoriously bad writer and I am quoting him directly there. While I may have turned it in a bit hastily the first time, I have now been over the rest of the article with a fine toothed comb. Of course, I do have the nasty habit of missing what is staring me in the face. What else are you finding wrong with it? Thanks.

Ed · Post by Ed » Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:41 am

No. The errors I find are not in the quoted text. As noted in your first rejection, this article contains errors with sentence structure (particularly run-on sentences), clarity, and punctuation. Please proofread thoroughly.

Ed

CoreyR · Post by **CoreyR** » Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:46 am

Thank you very much, I will get right on it and go over it again from this light. Much appreciated.